I am designing a 4-page spread for a payday loans feature (THRILLING!) and need your help. This is what I have. I'm trying to embody the obnoxiousness of the entire payday loan industry; their in-your-face advertising and garish designs. It's still up in the air whether VOX can use the full gradient as the page background, so that may be cut. Also, the second spread is definitely unfinished. I can't believe I'm putting up an unfinished design, I feel so vulnerable. Please, give me good ideas!